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 5 peices of my mind by Violyd

(EMERALD)

blade of grass

A jungle

leading

or am I lost

explorer

or wanderer

Hero

or...

wishful thinker

Dark as Day break?

or

Bright as midnight?

a commen pebble

or a precious gem?

Emerald

 

(VIOLET)

A whisper on the wind

my voice

the sound of silence

drawing

mountains

valleys

into the earth

ruslting the leaves

howling

fierce

destroying forests

angry

calm

invisible

gentle

hurt

quiet

shy

Whisper

Violet,

 

(RUBY)

Refining

consuming

warming

burning

All I want

is to melt you heart.

but be careful I can scorch it.

I'm here to help,

but sometimes I can hurt.

sometimes i am crazy, but thats me

I won't change what I am

a spark

a flame

a raging fire

a Ruby

 

(SKYE)

Am I full of Violent emotions

 all competing against each other?

or Am I reflecting pool

showing only what lays before me?

am I passive, flowing around the obsticles in life.

or am I steadily erroding away my problems

with a strong, mercyless rapid.

can you tell, cause I can't

if I think to hard I confuse myself.

Am I arching high?

or plummuting to the sandy shore,

knowing I will break when I reach the seafloor?

Tell ME already,

before I accidentally pull you to the undertow.

It's not your fault, you didn't do anything to me.

But I constantly change.

you told me what?

I am both.

while I have my raging feelings, I still reflect.

The strong and rushing river, on the surface is calm.

reflecting

It's deep azure

cloudy, mysterious,

questioning

ever shifting,

 Skye

 

(SHADOWEN)

Mirror

Mirror

hidden in the dark.

shows nothing.

is useless.

It doesn't work.

It only needs a fraction

a silver lining, of pure light.

but I am the Mirror in the dark.

I am broken on the inside and out.

I need help, I need light.

But light hurts.

light reveals,

it shows every mistake and failure

and cut and bruise.

It reaches deep inside and exposes you.

showing every weakness.

thats why I continue to hide.

I am scared, but I'll never admit it.

you know why I always hurt you?

It's because you are continually placing your hand

on broken shards of glass

from the Mirror, that I am...

Wait, this pain, it doesn't effect you?

you are picking up the broken shards.

you have a light I can see it.

your... mending this mirror.

your smiling, and reaching towards me.

you hold out your hand.

you don't look down on me, your healing me.

with the light you brought.

I can see now, my reflection.

you said I am Beautiful.

and you say I know how you feel.

you used to be scared and broken too.

but you learned.

Then i realise I can too.

the light extends, I see other mirrors, hiding in shadows.

Your my new friend, and together we can heal the people hiding in the shadows

in the hall of broken Mirrors

riddle

Who am I?

I know the anwere now

I am Me

I am a Shadow.

I am a mirror.

reflecting you.

You aren't perfect.

but you are yourself.

I should know.

I'm you.

 

( ALL FIVE)

We

Me

Fire

Water

Earth

Air

light

dark

I am hopeful

I'm plauged with doubt

I am terrified

I'm exited and happy

I am furious

I am calm

I'm a leader

and a follower

I am shy, gentle, calm, sweet, quiet, SILENT

LOUD, strong, bold, warrior, quick to act

Hyper, Joyful, optimistic, smiling always, firey

Hiding, reflecting, watching, shadow, doubtful... but growing

Leader, encourager, friend, Hopeful, light,

A hero?

Me?

no

WE!

 

 

 

 

today, I felt like writing, and drawing so... this is what I came out with.
a poem for each character plus one poem describing them combined PLUS a picture to go with it.
I am unsure what sort of art this would be, It's not Line art is it? because it has color in the background and their outline.

As for the Poems, I do not mind constructed critism, I would love if you commented.
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Ario-Hime Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I really, really enjoyed this.
I can pick out a couple spelling mistakes but other than that.

It was fantastic.
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Violyd Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh, thanks =D, and thank you for the fave too :)
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Violyd Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
... wait I don't remember posting this as a journal entry. lol
what ever.
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